Sweetest Escape.

Fond memories tied together with music & poetry, brings a smile to the reader's face :)

A rather interesting write. something that does sound better and has a more clear music to it with each time read. really. though i would say that you use a bit of unneeded words, that you could easily remove.

'' and with each strum of guitar,
familiar lyrics become tattooed on my heart;
a connection between life and song-
of you and me.''

you can easily remove ''of'' here

'' Romantic rhythms weaved together,
tell of a story,never ceasing to soothe my soul. ''

you can remove ''tell of'' and i think it should be ceased not ceasing? (just a thought?) especially with ''weaved'' above? don't know, they sound a bit strange.

''A smile teases my lips with each phrase sung,
it is then I think of you, I feel your soft presence.
This is my sweetest escape. ''

I think you can remove the ''I'' before feel and ''this is'' before ''my sweet escape''.

It's a bit strange i've never read any of your work before. or maybe i've did older ones? no idea. hope i've helped. and i do know it depends on the way you read the entire piece. so if by any means it reads better your way then leave it as is. keep writing.

Excellent poem... I liked the way this poem flows. Also liked the depiction very much. Wonderful!

Beautiful words weaved together to form a lovely poem...
loved the imagery... well written :)

Not only did I love the soft images that drifted past my eyes, but the happy feeling of love that spoke so strongly. This was a stunning write and definitely made me smile with your creative phrases...I really enjoyed this, please keep writing such beauty as always...Lovely to read...

~MaryAnne