As a musician, i appreciate the musical descriptions. some songs just have a special place in your heart that speak more than words ever could.

what a wonderful escape. :)

Good to have someone that makes you feel like this and thinking of them does give a sweet escape from the mundane things of everyday life. Well done.

Not only did I love the soft images that drifted past my eyes, but the happy feeling of love that spoke so strongly. This was a stunning write and definitely made me smile with your creative phrases...I really enjoyed this, please keep writing such beauty as always...Lovely to read...

~MaryAnne

Beautiful words weaved together to form a lovely poem...
loved the imagery... well written :)

Excellent poem... I liked the way this poem flows. Also liked the depiction very much. Wonderful!

A rather interesting write. something that does sound better and has a more clear music to it with each time read. really. though i would say that you use a bit of unneeded words, that you could easily remove.

'' and with each strum of guitar,
familiar lyrics become tattooed on my heart;
a connection between life and song-
of you and me.''

you can easily remove ''of'' here

'' Romantic rhythms weaved together,
tell of a story,never ceasing to soothe my soul. ''

you can remove ''tell of'' and i think it should be ceased not ceasing? (just a thought?) especially with ''weaved'' above? don't know, they sound a bit strange.

''A smile teases my lips with each phrase sung,
it is then I think of you, I feel your soft presence.
This is my sweetest escape. ''

I think you can remove the ''I'' before feel and ''this is'' before ''my sweet escape''.

It's a bit strange i've never read any of your work before. or maybe i've did older ones? no idea. hope i've helped. and i do know it depends on the way you read the entire piece. so if by any means it reads better your way then leave it as is. keep writing.

Fond memories tied together with music & poetry, brings a smile to the reader's face :)