A wonderful write.

It hurts when we find faults within ourselves, but it's much better than missing them, and continue to hurt the ones we love.

Great job! I felt the poem was a good length, you didn't drag it on too long and your material was very easy to relate to. I also enjoyed the ending, endings tend to be the hardest part, and you summed it up very nicely. 5/5

mandy :)