Comments : Tired

  • 14 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    What truth is echoing from your words and your every thought, we all face a plummeting struggle in our life where we don't understand forgiveness anymore, happiness always a day away. God bless you always and take care now.

    ~MaryAnne

  • 14 years ago

    by Jad

    Such sad words and emotions filled into this poem. I have felt like this every now and then. A good poem but a sad one at that. Good job and keep writing.

  • 14 years ago

    by Sourav

    Introspection and thought of the past often make us feel this way. A poem which seems came straight from the heart. Very emotional and well written.

  • 14 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    I always love honest and heartfelt poems in which the writer connects with the reader in such a short amount of time. We all must realize that in life we will hurt and be hurt, but the pain and the struggle to brighter days makes us stronger for when they arrive. I know we all hear/say live life with no regrets, but no matter how great a life may be we all dwell on the past. Very well done 5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by anand singh

    A reality charged piece with every word describing the way I sometimes feel.
    The only difference is that I always have to remember to forgive.
    Good job on this beautiful piece.
    Paul...