Fragments do break...

by Marcus blake   Jul 4, 2010


Dreams spark forth a movement
And idea's become tools of revenge
They say anything is possible
But the struggle follows us even in the end
I stopped believing...
Yea I gave up on a better life
Instead, looked forward to a life of everlasting pain
In which true peace I felt I could attain
But I was wrong
And my solitude only brought me more Unhappiness
"What more can this world do to me"
Take from me
I give it my loved ones
My ambitions
Everything I am
And it still hunts me for even more
I figured being alone
Would insure me to never be hurt
Lest I forget
That the pain from hav'in no one to care for
Was far worse...
I endured the solitude none the less
And as the days passed
I felt died but still alive breathing
Like I was the only one thing in the world
Like this...
This is more than a phase of moment
This is what being alone is...

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  • 13 years ago

    by Aure

    I didn't realize I was holding my breath untill the very last word.
    Your poem is true and stronger because of it.
    Technically imperfect, but perfect in the absence of technique.
    Keep writing, and I'll keep reading your work!

  • 14 years ago

    by DreamingOutLoud

    This poem is scary because it potrays the relaity many feel!