You sure know how to catch my attention. lol
i truely do like it, alot.
5/5
cant wait for more! :D

I must be overly sensitive today but this made me cry. Literally. I...have no words exactly. I was that person in that poem..and it just captured my attention to the tee. Without a doubt an amazing write.

victoria

Uplifting

Words went right though my heart i relate in every word.

Wow, that hurts so good. A strike right through the soul of depression. I voted 5/5. Amazing and powerful

****The world did hurt you.
Scars and burns tell no lie.
And it's harder to heal the wounds within.
The ghost still haunts you.
For the years and the tears you did hide.
But they don't know it.
Make them all know it.
LIVE.*****

Okay you say that I'm talented but this is wow your way talented this right here is like a strength for me because i struggled with cutting for 6 years burning and almost killing myself... and to me it kinda says i know you have been through hell and so have I but you got to get past it and live i can relate so much and just how you worded this is amazing this is going in my favorits well done 5/5

This is magnificent.
The beam of hope after each and every dark stanza is quiet worthwhile.
You penned this !!

Wow! this is awesome, amazing, fantastic take your pick! 5/5

You say so much in your poems that hit home for many. Wicked cool song if you put it to music. Well done as always my friend
Connie