by Karl Wild GG23 Jul 9, 2010
category :
Love, romance /
first love
**Read slow and preferably aloud** |
by mira
Very beatiful poem karl |
by danielle
Omg wow i totally love this poem it was excellent!!! so sweet your really good at this keep up the good work 5/5 |
It was so damn great couldn't be more perfect , but who felt so much pain n' passed so sh!ty moments can't write something like this beauty cause the pain they feel is deeper than the words can bring on the lines , n' that means |
by Mr Rhee
Karl, this is an excellent write. I loved your line about counting the stars. I wouldn't think twice about making the suggested corrections. It's perfect just the way it is. Good work, man. |
Wow. I am definitely adding you to my favorites. You write such beautiful poems. I loved how you put in the 11:11 wishing that is very cool. My friend and I do that all the time. This poem gave me goose bumps :) The only spot I saw that was confusing was: |