by BREEawNUHH
My first reaction is that this is beautiful. I love the emotion that pours from your words. |
by yblehs
"Memorized the lines to your heart, |
Goodness gracious that is beautiful. |
by Lady Nik
You always could write a love poem :] until this day I still haven't found someone that write better love poems then you. You put so much heart and emotion in to your poem they they come to life for me everytime I read them. It's like watching a movie. That's how real your feelings are and how vivid your images are. Veyr lovely poem. I wouldn't change a thing. Nik |
by Minkus
Nitpicks: *There are numerous places that I would have used different punctuation, but they're not very important. Briana's comment covered some of them. |
I must say that I am impressed with every aspect of this poem The theme, the rhythm and rhyme flawlessly flowing to the romantic passion that has no limit |
by Levi
I enjoyed reading this piece it portrays a great feeling of love, I can almost feel it jumping out at me when I read. |
This was an okay piece. Sorry if that seems patronising, but it just seemed average to me. (Sadly, it reminded me of some of my own love poems). I don't particularly think it's a bad poem, but for such a popular topic, it needs to be stronger. |
First of all you copied the poem almost word for word you just changed a couple lines. Get a life kid, don't take something of mine you could never write in your lifetime and try and ruin it and take credit for it. |
You are an amazing writer. I love your poems! |
by Sunshine
I was gna swear ! yes i was gna swear u made me have tears my goodness this part |
This is a beautiful piece of writting |
Wow. I am definitely adding you to my favorites. You write such beautiful poems. I loved how you put in the 11:11 wishing that is very cool. My friend and I do that all the time. This poem gave me goose bumps :) The only spot I saw that was confusing was: |
by Mr Rhee
Karl, this is an excellent write. I loved your line about counting the stars. I wouldn't think twice about making the suggested corrections. It's perfect just the way it is. Good work, man. |
It was so damn great couldn't be more perfect , but who felt so much pain n' passed so sh!ty moments can't write something like this beauty cause the pain they feel is deeper than the words can bring on the lines , n' that means |
by danielle
Omg wow i totally love this poem it was excellent!!! so sweet your really good at this keep up the good work 5/5 |
by mira
Very beatiful poem karl |