Ohh i really liked this! its very different, and i like how you used the broken english, clever!

The imagery in this well written poem makes me long for a journey that is not only imaginary

So very well done

Cute:) nice wayto describe frndship:) like ^^ i love the imagery is gud! it is a job well done:)

This is so cute...I enjoyed reading...I love every line. Friendship lasts forever! Thanks for sharing! God bless you!!!

-Pink Butterfly-

This very good. I ejnoy it