Nice job with the imagery in this piece.

A now awakened body fights to drive sanity away
Let the demon retreat into a crevice
that's enveloped by life's mundane circumstances
never to escape again

This stanza really stood out for me.
Good job!
Take care
Cindy

With hands . . . everywhere
^
The periods are perfect here. You could've easily gone wrong, but seriously, they are perfect!
This is the most beautiful of the poems I've read by you thus far. It deserved the win in my contest, thank you for participating.
The imagery is precise, colorful, and flawless.
Very well done.
"viscous" <- did you mean vicious?

I've reread this thrice now :)

5/5