Comments : Together or Apart

  • 13 years ago

    by Lioness

    I quite like this poem.

    I read it as though someone is more into the relationship than the other. Or maybe in the relationship for different reasons.

    I feel that there's a lot of emotion going on and a lot of confusion about where you both stand. It's really heartbreaking when things happen like this.

    I love the flow and rhyming of your poem is awesome.

    A well written poem

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