Behind my eyes

by Brookie   Jul 15, 2010


I close my eyes
and then I sigh
For here, nothing can go wrong
For here, I can stay long

Watching the stars dance
It is like I'm in a romance
There is this strange bond
that keeps us going on

Things I can not say
are bursting forth
Behind my eyes
nothing can go wrong.

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  • 14 years ago

    by Bradley Peter

    I'll be 100% honest with you, I can't really think of anything I liked about this poem, except, that somehow, I got a feel for your passion. I have to say, it just seemed like no real thought or effort went into this. Like you just strung some words together. I'll say no more, but, and I honestly mean this, please let me know when you've submitted a new poem. I'd like to read it.

    Brad.

    P.S. Please vote and comment honestly on all the poems you read.

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