I'll be 100% honest with you, I can't really think of anything I liked about this poem, except, that somehow, I got a feel for your passion. I have to say, it just seemed like no real thought or effort went into this. Like you just strung some words together. I'll say no more, but, and I honestly mean this, please let me know when you've submitted a new poem. I'd like to read it.

Brad.

P.S. Please vote and comment honestly on all the poems you read.