by Coldstone Jul 19, 2010
category :
Special events /
birthday
Many many happy returns of the day Sweetheart, |
The person behind the poem is really special...This is so sweet and adorable as well...God bless you! |
by Coldstone
Thnx! |
It wasn't great, but it wasn't awful either. Some of the repetition was good, but you also overused the word angel. Couple little punctuation errors, nothing really to serious. I gave this an honest 4/5 nice work very sweet |
A poem that left a smile on my face, good job. A write that expresses a feeling of love. This is a good write. |
by Coldstone
Thanks!:) This is very special for me:) |