Comments : Happy Birthday Angel

  • 14 years ago

    by Cantchangeme

    On this site there are so many poems that concentrate on the negative

    This is a beautifully written celebration of a loved one, which is both refreshing and fantastically executed. A poem that i really enjoyed reading and left me with a smile :)

  • 14 years ago

    by Coldstone

    Thanks!:) This is very special for me:)

  • 14 years ago

    by WakingFreedom

    A poem that left a smile on my face, good job. A write that expresses a feeling of love. This is a good write.

  • 14 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    It wasn't great, but it wasn't awful either. Some of the repetition was good, but you also overused the word angel. Couple little punctuation errors, nothing really to serious. I gave this an honest 4/5 nice work very sweet

  • 14 years ago

    by Coldstone

    Thnx!

  • 14 years ago

    by Pink Butterfly

    The person behind the poem is really special...This is so sweet and adorable as well...God bless you!

    -Pink Butterfly-