by Nobody Jul 21, 2010
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
Race across a ribbon |
by Em
Wow. |
by BlueJay
Dang this poem is very well written. The title is intruiguing, and the story is wow. Great job. |
Wow... I loved it. So beautiful! I could relate to this and I really love remembering things from my childhood and makes me miss things I can no longer experience! Congratulations on the win! |
I love how you referred to the game of Candyland and never really mentioned it. It is an awful thing that we are taught so young that everything is great and grand only to grow up and realize it's not. Wonderful job on the poem. |
by Sylvia
It is scary when we realize that we are now an adult and have to leave childhood behind at least for a time. Good job. |