by Poet on the Piano Jul 22, 2010
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
Devout violinist draw your bow |
There is something so intriguing about violins to me. This poem was nice and I think the only thing that could improve it is the format. At first glance it just seems bunched up and might deter someone from reading it. In my opinion the words do not need to be changed at all or anything in it for that matter, just the delivery. Awesome job on keeping the reader intensed in the subject. |