If only we could have sweet serenity in our lives. I know that would make me happy. (smiles). Well done.

I would love to have serenity as you have put it. Nicely written as well. Thanks for this calming poem. :] Good job and keep writing.

Absolutely incredible write, I didn't know how four lines could say so much. You did a wonderful job, made the reader crave for serenity as well .

//Fortune will finally smile at us, for they say it favors the brave// loved this line...
its very inspiring :) well penned :)

//Fortune will finally smile at us, for they say it favors the brave// loved this line...
its very inspiring :) well penned :)