Beautiful! really it was, i actually loved how this poem ended, it just tied everything together and it was perfect for this piece! Unfortunately, i dont have anything to say that would make this piece better because really, it was great!

'Reminiscences swallowed by the past,
And we have now misplaced its reigns.'
- that was my favourite line right there! good work (Y)

Mournful and well written. The flow is flawless and I really like reading this one. The final stanza of the poem really touched me! I feel so sorry for you if it really happened. Wish the wound would heal soon :D

Great job.

Take care,
Fsams

Every word rang true like a bell of crystal, clear and loud. You could have taken my emotions and with them wrote this poem.
Great mix of emotion and longing.
excellent

Wonderfully made...nice poem