That was probably the best and most powerfull poem I have read. Your really talented. I'm sorry of your experience

im sorry... i love ur piece... but i feel so sad thou... hope he rot in hell... well anyways... take care =) and hope u can visit mine =) ciao

i am sorry for you experiance i though very powerful words to describe your horrific experiance keep it up you are very talented

Emma

Well, it was a great poem. You described it perfectly. But, it also makes me sick to think that someone would do that. I've heard a lot of rape stories and i just want to say: i know it's hard. I'm praying for you and all the other girls that have had to go through this. Just keep living, because it'll get better. And i hope i see you in heaven

hey, that poem is the best i have ever read, and im really sorry that u had 2 go through that, it takes alot of guts 2 tell people things like that, i gave it a 5, lotsa love from hannah xoxox- if u need sum1 to talk 2, just email me

hey, that poem is the best i have ever read, and im really sorry that u had 2 go through that, it takes alot of guts 2 tell people things like that, i gave it a 5, lotsa love from hannah xoxox- if u need sum1 to talk 2, just email me

Waht an amazing poem!! That must've been a really tough experience to go through and Congradulations for speaking about it. Don't care what people like matthew.
Keep writing

hey sweetie.... im very sorry to hear that something like this happened to you..... i hope that who eva did this too u is locked away 4 life! i loved yout poem ur expressed everything greatly and the emotion and epth is encrediable! hope to read more of ur great work!

Sammie

i just want to say to the yeah, ok person on page 5...thanx. yeah. i said i wanted to express myself. i dont know about you but i dont want to attach myself to my fears forever, getting this out is better then keeping it in. not everyone is searching for sympathy

Omg hun! This poem touched me! I loved it and im so sorry about how this is how it happend....and ifyou people dont believe this poem thats ur prob cause people really do go through this shit everyday! and matthew when u said how it just coincidentally rhymed its because she has the talent to do so! Im not sayin it was rite to sterotype guyz but u cant blame her cause most guyz r like dat! Aneways keep up da good work hun it was a great poem....take care.....luv life.....*hugs and smooches*

Hi...I would like to take a minute out of my time to say that was a really great poem you wrote! Every word of it. I know how you feel because I also was raped before by my ex-boyfriend to. Your really strong! I hope that you could read some of my poems even though they aren't as good as yours! I can't wait to read more of your poems!

I am very sorry that this happened. You are right for realizing that it wasn't your fault. Must have taken a lot of courage to write this. Keep being strong. Wonderful poem.

~Hannah~

I know exactly how u feel i was 13 but went through the exact same thing. i'm just glad to know there someone who knows how i feel. feel free to im me or contact me anytime

Great poem. I cried when i read it. Im sorry that had to happen to you. If you get a chance to read some of mine. Much Love

Hey, your poem was extremely touching I'm sorry you had to go through that. I congragulate you on being strong enough to write that. I'll be praying for you. Stay strong. :_\

God Bless

kat- when i said i was raped at 14, i ment i was raped when i was 14 years old- peace out i gotta run- thank you to everyone for the support

wow what a jerk i cant believe people do that to others its horrible what happened to you is unforgivable thats so sad that this had to happen to you

OMG THAT IS SOOOOOOOO SAD IM CRYING ON CRYING THAT IS SO SAD

Wow. Very deep and good poem.

Good Job.