This was very good, it was a powerful poem, it reflects today's society, and i could really hint the desperation for a better world.

'Bloodshed in the name of racism,is this how you created earthlings to be?
I don't want to be human if this is what humanity is supposed to be!' - loved it!

good work :D

A good piece. Although your rhymes do seem forced. It was a powerful write though.
I liked the repeated words of Dear God. It brings more meaning I think.

You definately have the potential to be a great writer, but I think right now you're trying to hard. Just write what comes to your mind, it seems like you were trying to make it rhyme and it seemed forced at times. I like the idea and its pretty well done, but its sloppy in certain areas as well. Take your time and sometimes not thinking as much is better in poetry, write with your heart not with your mind. Well done though

Thanx! i appreciate it:)

You established your idea well. However, the expression of it didn't feel special, as I think a poem should. It felt more like prose with some forced rhymes and line breaks. You can do better!

A very very beautiful Poem. it is worth reading... but i would like to comment on these specific lines

" Bloodshed in the name of racism,is this how you created earthlings to be?
I don't want to be human if this is what humanity is supposed to be! "

We are The most beautiful among all of God's Creation. This is what we chose to be. a murderer , a rapist , a racist . God has granted us a free will. and this earth you referred to is our Examination hall. This is a our Test not the True Life. Life will start After Death according to our results. i used to Question my Lord sometimes, and i would get the answer that STUNNED me.....

" All praises belong to God the only One , the Merciful. Allah "

Well said! n thnx:)