Comments : Give Up

  • 14 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    I like the rhythm and the rhyming isn't forced. A thought provoking piece.

  • 14 years ago

    by Cindy

    Congrats on your win :)
    Take care
    Cindy

  • 14 years ago

    by Kayl

    Love this :)

  • 14 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    Definitely heartbreaking but you have written such thoughtful words in a short, well-flowing time. Well worth the reader and congratulations on the win, very much deserved for you have spoken a lot in a few. God bless you always.

    ~MaryAnne

  • 14 years ago

    by Milo

    Great write it looks like you been writing poems for some time now and they are quite profound. Honestly, you don't need another pat on the back from me; I take it you already know how good you really are. ;)

  • 14 years ago

    by junet

    Simple.. but full of feelings.. few words but had expressed everything ^_^

  • 14 years ago

    by Yakari Gabriel

    Love doesn't give up on anyone my dear,love this write :'D

  • 14 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    I liked the poem for the simplicity but was still searching for more. A good poem but not all that excellent to me, I believe I've seen something a lot better from you; maybe you're just experimenting with a new style but I was expecting some more with some metaphors or stronger language in it. Don't want to seem like the negative comment on here, I like your poem and the way it flowed so smoothly, I just wish I could have read something more intriguing. Just my thoughts of course.

  • 14 years ago

    by Siham

    Great peom , emotional & meaningful ...
    Congratulations on your win , you really worth it .
    wonderful job 5/5