by JaM Jul 26, 2010
category :
Love, romance /
love is
Many times I have been lost, |
by Redangelwings
Love really does set you onto the path of light and makes you really blissful. Sometimes we do need to find our own path and I think that was what you were saying. Love helps us but we sometimes have to guide ourselves but its nice to have someone catch us when we fall. I love being in the arms of my love or any love. They really do keep you safe. I love the emotion you show here. You say this person is your hero and saves you from a villain or life that is unfair. I love how you say both sides here. Pain and love. Love really can cause you pain but you always work through that. Its always great to be honest no matter what. I love how you seem to be the fallen angel at the end. You seem weak but in the end you can save yourself if you have too. But no this person is the true angel and you shown how much you love them throughout the poem. Great! 5/5 |
This poem was a true love poem balanced with the warmth of romance and the realism of relationships, though not always shining and wonderful, but something that through good and bad, lasts. I was drawn to this poem because my hunni calls me angel. Thank you for penning you love so sweetly. |