What Is It Like?

by Kuro   Jul 26, 2010


What is it like?
To be the rain cloud
On a sunny day?

It feels like trying to
Stop the spread of a
Virus, and failing

What is it like?
To loose happiness,
And fake it everyday?

It feels like an angel
Fallen from grace
And painted white

What is it like?
To need somebody,
And have nobody?

It is your worst fear
Coming true to
Haunt your conscious

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  • 14 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    Well Benny ]: that made me no so happy at the end. Very sad poem indeed. I say I take you out for ice cream so you will write happy stuff after :] Anywho I liked this piece. I liked how you asked a question and gave an answer. Very clever my friend. Nice work :] Nik

  • 14 years ago

    by Sunshine

    :/ this is beautifully sad ..

    i was caught by the 1st stanza and did directly give me a sign THIS is gna b sad.. and yes it was

    I loved tho ur words..how u worked it out..just amazing

    5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by Anthony M

    Very well painted, succinct yet laden with emotion.

  • 14 years ago

    by Cindy

    Ben
    So much deep thoughts in this piece. Makes the reader also stop and think.
    Good job!
    Take Care
    Cindy

  • 14 years ago

    by Sylvia

    The last two verses are so sad but they are true. Well done.

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