Trespassing Boundaries.

by Courageous Dreamer   Jul 26, 2010


Boundaries of privacy-
treacherous wires traced
with trust, never to be crossed--
trespassed by cruel footprints.

Snarled brush of ignorance
ignites a wildfire, breaking mending ties-
unleashing end of relations,
fracturing all hope for repair.

Resentment spreads far and wide-
creating needless damage.
Maturity hidden in rubble, a golden prize-
confrontation essential for closure.

© Copyright. Courageous Dreamer. July 26 2010.

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  • 14 years ago

    by Jad

    An excellent job. I Know many people who feel like this and it is truly sad for those who do. I hope you are okay. Anyway good job and keep writing.

  • 14 years ago

    by Sunshine

    What a gr8 ending Resentment spreads far and wide-
    creating needless damage.
    Maturity hidden in rubble, a golden prize-
    confrontation essential for closure.

    well done miss...as u have ever been.. talented :)

  • 14 years ago

    by Robert Anthony

    Wow, Excellent! 10/5!

  • 14 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    You nailed such powerful words here, so well-picked and spoken with deliverance and emotions, as all of yours do. Glad to read a new write from you, you are a joy to follow on here and see what is going on in that poetic mind of yours!

    Take care, talk to you later.

    ~MaryAnne

  • 14 years ago

    by Faithless

    Wow, Temps, I truly admire the way you penned down your thoughts. As the reader I'm able to feel the protagonist being neglected; rendered in an unintended situation where he/she can't undo the damages that has already been done. A very cleverly crafted poem.
    Excellent Job:)

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