If this is a reflection of your feelings, someone has really messed up. Talking to them about what has happened sometimes works but things will never be the same again. Well done

Temps
What deep emotions pour from your words. The imagery and word choices are great. Just so sad things like this happen. Always leaving scars on our hearts.
Great job!
Love Cindy

Wow, Temps, I truly admire the way you penned down your thoughts. As the reader I'm able to feel the protagonist being neglected; rendered in an unintended situation where he/she can't undo the damages that has already been done. A very cleverly crafted poem.
Excellent Job:)

You nailed such powerful words here, so well-picked and spoken with deliverance and emotions, as all of yours do. Glad to read a new write from you, you are a joy to follow on here and see what is going on in that poetic mind of yours!

Take care, talk to you later.

~MaryAnne

Wow, Excellent! 10/5!

What a gr8 ending Resentment spreads far and wide-
creating needless damage.
Maturity hidden in rubble, a golden prize-
confrontation essential for closure.

well done miss...as u have ever been.. talented :)

An excellent job. I Know many people who feel like this and it is truly sad for those who do. I hope you are okay. Anyway good job and keep writing.