3 legged dog

by Emilina   Jul 27, 2010


You showed up at my home
from where did you rome
i fell in love with you
i know you want to be here too
your owner we let know
but they didnt answer or show
3 legged dog i love you
hero i know you want to be here too
why is dad calling
and why am i bawling
why are they taking you away
Please no wait please let her stay
Why is hero going out the gate
NO STOP PLEASE!!! WAIT
oh 3 legged dog i love you
hero i know you want to be here too
you i want to adopt
for when you left i dropped

For the 3 legged dog HERO i had all day today until my dad called the pound

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  • 14 years ago

    by Bradley Peter

    Hi. I don't mean to be mean about this, but I think this poem was simple, and not in the good way. They were simple rhymes, simple words, and, it felt like you were just trying to rhyme the whole time, and not really worry about what existed in the line before the rhyme. Also, the 'Hero i know you want to be here too', I felt, was too long, and totally disturbed the flow of the piece.

    Brad

    P.S. Please vote and comment on all the poems you read.

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