Heat (Haiku)

by Sylvia   Jul 27, 2010


Sweltering, sultry
oppressive summer heat breeds
stormy, rainy days.

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Haiku (also called nature or seasonal haiku) is an unrhymed Japanese verse consisting of three unrhymed lines of five, seven, and five syllables (5, 7, 5) or 17 syllables in all. Haiku is usually written in the present tense and focuses on nature (seasons).

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  • 14 years ago

    by anand singh

    A beautifiul haiku, an enjoyable read.

  • 14 years ago

    by Sunshine

    Sylvia, too deep for a short form..you are a fantastic poet.
    I felt warmth rather than heart as I read this poetic verse..

    a gr8 haiku but a gr8 Sylvia

    much love
    hugs*
    5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    I guess it must be very very hot there! This Haiku says it all..good write :)

  • 14 years ago

    by Jad

    A beautiful picture painted with so few words. I love how you were able to make such a wonderful piece with so few words making great imagery. Good job and keep writing.

  • 14 years ago

    by Faithless

    Nicely worded. I like how you penned this haiku, describing the weather before the storm.

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