Abstract Atmosphere

by Poet on the Piano   Jul 27, 2010


Transparent ribbon
swivels around my thumb,
scented dye paint brushed
onto citrus buds.
Fruit bodies wiggle
and gleaming strings
of twisted oxygen
wildly dash
to kissable treats,
like wallowing
on plastic imaginations.

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  • 14 years ago

    by Ingrid

    I love the wording in this, MaryAnne..a very mature write, with an overwhelming feeling of serenity in it.

    Very well done!

    God bless and a hug,

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 14 years ago

    by clevername

    This poem is fantastic. so simple yet so beautiful. with only a few words you created real emotion and calmness. i loved it

  • 14 years ago

    by clevername

    This poem is fantastic. so simple yet so beautiful. with only a few words you created real emotion and calmness. i loved it