by Sunshine Jul 30, 2010
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
In my book there are old yellow |
by Decayed
In my book there are old yellow |
Awww... wow this poem is so deep and it really affected me... I love how this poem is about the opposite of fairytales and happy endings... It shows that there are sad realities that some people face in this world... It's the sad truth and you expressed it so beautifully.. |
by Meena Krish
Each verse holds vivid imagery and it just flowed smoothly right till the end..yet another touching write beautifully penned. |
by Lana
I love how you have captured the life of so many and placed it this way, in a book. Not only was the poem very well written (although sad) but the idea was also very creative. I really enjoyed reading this one from you. |
I love this its like a twisted fairytale. 5/5 love the last stanza. ties it all together |