Smitten

Well, I believe Temps has said it all. I really liked this poem though. Very short but made its point crystal clear. Good job and keep writing.

I must give you props to have written something so short & to have held the true meaning of what it feels like to be smitten with someone. You really captured it very well. I liked how the ending lines rhymed, it really held the poem together & made everything that more wonderful.