Comments : The Serpent In The Garden

  • 14 years ago

    by Unknown Substance

    This is a very powerful poem love your choice of words 5/5!

    Unknown

  • 14 years ago

    by Ronald Edwards

    What a snake in the grass, great write SS looking forward to more

  • 13 years ago

    by Miss Lonely Teacher

    Awesome poem, loved it
    ~M.R.K

  • 13 years ago

    by Kips2.0

    I like the poem...simple and short!