by LaFlaka93 Aug 3, 2010
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
I hate the feeling that I can't make u happy, I hate the feeling that I know sum how at this point you hate me, & I hate the fact that it happened to end this way, but all I can say is I'm sorry if I hurted you, but there are things that are still unsaid like how ill always love you, & how you made me believe that just maybe love does exist in this crazy world, how you changed me inside & out, how you made me see stars in the sky everynite & how you left me up so high & no one can never compare to you & everyday ill thank you for making me who I am today, I guess, I always love you with all my heart, your love was different from everyone elses, its like you made everything in my body at peace & I love how u always make me reach for more & more... You made everything make sense to me, You set everything free within me, You have my body,soul & mind, & I know its not easy loving me but I love you & I need you baybie.... I'm sorry hundred times </3 |
by LaFlaka93
Thank u |
Ok so there are one or two spelling and gramatical mistakes, but the poem itself was lovely, you showed a lot of emotion and came across as if you were really sad and lost because of the breakup, this carried the emotion over to the reader and actually made me feel sorry for you. Well done. Grant |