by Melissa Aug 4, 2010
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
It's not your fault your talk |
by Cindy
Melissa |
by Andrew
Impressive very creative poem your one of the few who actually amaze me. |
I didn't really like the jagged lines thing, it actually confused me at first, but then I figured it out...I guess it's different than how people usually use that style to put into their poetry but can't say I liked it. Other than that interesting write, it seemed like a bunch of different ideas in one, that were kind of all different in their own ways...but that made the poem more interesting...Nicely done. |