"Without you..I see lines of fire in my brain
I feel sadness, depression,I feel unbearable pain"

"Without you..I see cold nights singing the saddest
tunes"
- loved these lines, they portray such imagery ...

this piece was beautiful! i cant believe you didnt put it up sooner! good work :D i can see how it kind of reminds me of midsummer nights view ... haha :) loved it!

These are definitely real, true feelings you would feel when you're without someone that you love. It's such an unbearable feeling....

Your poem has a voice and the feelings behind each line is very much felt and understood..well written...take care.

"Without you I see the world a scary tail that ends dead..
..I read black words of a horrible spooky book"
liked these line though the whole of it is impact full :) nice