by Tangible heartache Aug 5, 2010
category :
Dark, fantasy /
dark, horror
Wandering, Drifting In A Depth Of Nothing, |
by No1ButMe
I didn't like how everything was capitalized. I also just want to comment on how in the last stanza you have 'burning flesh' but then 'cold hell' to me that doesn't make much sense. But otherwise it was a good read. Put together well. |
by OmniLotus
Beautiful rhythmical flow all the way |
by slighte
Just breathe. |