by W0rld 0f t3ars Aug 7, 2010
category :
Life, society /
about society
Walking past my mirror |
Thanks so much A Dreamer, mean's a lot :) |
by BlueJay
This poem is absolutely amazing. It has a ton of vivid description and an excellent choice of words. There is a beautiful flow, that makes this poem even more enjoyable. I love the emotion in this piece and I love the message you state very clearly. The beginning is intruiging and the end is so strong. this is so worth a 5/5! Great job. |