by Chelsey Aug 8, 2010
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
So in love for many years |
by jescelle
Short and sweet, I loved it! So true, irony and love clash together and when you look back, you realize that you may have let go of something over the smallest problem. "Too late" :) |
This poem kept me on the edge of my seat |
by Lady Nik
I really liked the last stanza. I can relate to what you're saying. There have been times when I felt the end was coming but it still hurts the same and I was still shocked after. I think you did a very good job of telling their story and how their love fell apart. I love the flow of this piece as well as the imagey. Nice work dear. Nik |
This was a little confusing. A few things that I'd suggest changing are: |