Comments : Moments I love ----collab with Endless

  • 14 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Such sweet innocence portrayed here, ladies:)

    And I love the moments when I think of you
    for there are no moments that feels as true
    I love the smile, your image brings to my mind
    with the sweet shyness my red face tries to hide

    ^^
    This was my favorite stanza. I remember so well, how I could lay on the grass or on my bed as a teenager and think of HIM all day long ha ha. I still wonder how I got my homework done, lol.

    Ah, those sweet teenage years..how long ago they seem:)

    A very cool poem, written by one hand!

    Well done from me:)

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 14 years ago

    by chind

    LOVED THIS! it was really sweeet, and i just found myself smiling as i read it! haha nice work :)

    "I try to play it cool, but I cannot deny,
    that I think of you when I look to the starlit sky"
    - cute stuff right there!

    this was a cute piece overall! 5/5 !!!