Your writes are always a pleasure to read with lively images..its like watching a movie..liked the read :)

Like the word choice and creativity. Good job!

Congrats on your win Melissa :)
Take Care
Cindy

I really felt you were sharing a thought with the reader in this verse. Like it was just something that came to your mind and you spoke it out loud, hope you understand what I mean.

but suspicion keeps me
a kiss away
from rejection-

I singled this out because it showed your vulnerability and uncertainty. Over all I really loved this one.