Comments : I will be there today

  • 14 years ago

    by chind

    "When you're broken
    It's all been spoken
    And you feel you need somebody to take you back home"
    - lovely!!!

    i really liked this poem, it feels a little dark but at the same time comforting especially since you repeated "i will be there today, just like yesterday" and then that cancels out the darkness of the previous stanzas. good work :D