This is a very original poem, I haven't see anything like it. lol Your rhymes were great, never forced. My favorite lines were:

though many will follow
those who pretend to know

so true.

5/5

Thats a def. flowing well poem.. i loved the word choice and how everything was in harmony to u main concept but let me show u the lines that realllllyyyy got me into it

Hearts passionately beat
yet do not meet

i love i love i agree on that

5/5

I have to be honest, to start off -- I kinda feel like it's incomplete. It feels like it's an excerpt. Nevertheless, I do like the rhyme scheme. At first it took me a second to catch on, but I do like that. Despite not seeing much of a point, I think that this piece is interesting. Your vocabulary is good, too.

I'm giving this a four out of five because like I said, I just don't feel like it's complete. I know it's probably meant to be like that, but it doesn't really click with my brain.

`Briana
(sorry for the delay!)

Original with the rhyming scheme, i thought it was clever! it was a good piece overall, it was easy to read and follow on.

"Hearts passionately beat
yet often do not meet"
- loved those two lines!
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The rhyming style was very cool and unique, haven't seen it much before. Loved the lines about people following others who pretend they know whats going on or where there going haha It's what the worlds become...nicely done 5/5

A rather an interesting write from you, again. and very true and well penned. i guess we all can relate. lately it's seems this website is such an inspiration to you. so it's not that useless after all..

A rather an interesting write from you, again. and very true and well penned. i guess we all can relate. lately it's seems this website is such an inspiration to you. so it's not that useless after all..