Comments : Replace me.

  • 13 years ago

    by damont

    What an image you painted. imagine in that was human lol. beautiful just beautiful sad but beautiful

  • 12 years ago

    by Roronoa Zoro

    Wow very sad but I know how you feel keep writing!

  • 12 years ago

    by CathyButterflyJC

    LOVE YOUR POEM, IT SPEAKS TO ME, I JUST WENT THROUGH MY WORST BREAK UP, AND I'M JUST WAITING FOR HIM TO REPLACE ME!!!!!!!!!!!1

  • 12 years ago

    by Steven Beesley

    This is so graphical and painful to read as the imagery is so vivid and fierce.

    It is really sad, but you did do an extremely good job writing this piece!

    • 12 years ago

      by Chelsea

      Thank you. I appreciate the comment.