Comments : Falling Snow(Haiku/Tanka)

  • 14 years ago

    by Sunshine

    This is a very beautiful image :)
    i have loved your expressions and your word choice.
    no bet loved the verses u used..

    I think you show a worth it talent
    over here
    5/5
    keep the gd work

  • 14 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    I think you're in the wrong season! But it was a nice write, you seem to always know how to make nature beautiful through poetry.

  • 14 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    Such a beautiful piece Aussy :] I was glad you joined the contest lol I'm sure it wasn't hard for you. I think you did a wonderful job with the two forms and you know I'm always blown away by your work. Keep writing deary :] Nik