I really liked it but don't worry yourself to death sweetie. And sometimes the most anxiety filled situations are the ones that create beautiful writing so look at the positive side lol I loved it ^_^

Been seeing that flow again between your poems, and this is a good example of a change of pace with feelings without breaking the flow of the poems. That anxiety is a killer, and the tendency to have low self-esteem can sometimes shave us away slowly like a cheese grater until all we are is a pile of what used to be our solid emotions, now broken and separated. But of course, this is natural in our imperfect state, and Jehovah can always help us through a situation we may be having. *nod*