I am speechless by the order of these words which I can relate to. Words can wound as well as heal Outstanding poem!

A thorny life, yes, I think you decribed that accurately, Nana..but one day it will become the past, if you let it.

Painting this eternal winter, as I unrest in your shade
this soul of mine dies bitter as my color starts to fade

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Beautiful, unforced rhyming here and also a very beautiful wording, in all its sadness:(

I hope you will never truly grow bitter, life is so beautiful..no matter how deeply we get hurt..we still live in this beautiful place and you still have people who genuinly care for you, at least one;)

* a big comforting hug*

5/5 Ingrid

A good written poem with many feelings being portrayed in every line. A sad piece has been written but still shows the writers feelings. Good job and keep writing.

OUT STANDING!! i am also speechless!! i love this poem!! it has so much feeling,so much emotions! 6/5 ((yea its that good!(:))

Wow. that first line just killed me! Your words, the way you put them together, the phrases, each and every one of them are amazing. LOOOOOVELY!