One Night

by Spirit   Aug 14, 2010


"Hands touch
Eyes meet
Sudden silence
Sudden Heat"

Pulses quicken
Hearts do race
Breaths now match
Bodies embrace

Intertwining Limbs
Corresponding thoughts
Intentions so deliberate
Pleasure has been sought

Apprehensions flew
Away from mounting desire
Burned and incinerated
By this physical fire

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  • 14 years ago

    by silvershoes

    Easy flow and good rhyme scheme. The reader is immersed in the quick passion of the poem and glimpses of intimate imagery are unavoidably aroused. I do not know if the capitalization of words not at the beginning of lines was intentional or not. Also, I would be careful with the word "so." It's often overused, or used as a filler. It can be cliche.

    Nice poem overall - I like anything that flows.

    5/5

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