Unconditionally

by Lori   Aug 15, 2010


Watch me fall on my face
Let my heart decay
I love you so much
With you, ill still stay

Forget all about me
Let words cut like a knife
I will love you forever
You'll always be my life

You gave me life
That's about it
I give you everything
With you, I still sit

Go ahead, break me
Be as hurtful as you can be
Because ill always love you
Unconditionally

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  • 13 years ago

    by mandy

    I like how the name of the poem is the last word you used, it tied it up nicely. Beautiful write, 5/5!

    mandy :)

  • 13 years ago

    by Alvaro

    Strong. powerful. also tender..

    infragilis et tenera

  • 14 years ago

    by Bradley Peter

    This was a good piece and it had a strong ending, which is always key. It was focused and flowing, with emotion and power behind it.

    Brad

    P.S. PLease comment and vote honestly on every poem that you read.

  • 14 years ago

    by Reaper

    That was powerful and Amazing!!!

  • 14 years ago

    by Pink Butterfly

    No matter what the circumstances are...it is always wonderful to fall in love.. Hold on to that. To love unconditionally is rare. God bless you!!!

    -Pink Butterfly-

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