I really liked this dear. It was very deep and I know I have definitely felt that before. We often let people walk all over us for the sake of love but receive nothing back. My critique is that the rhythm seems a little jumpy, just try and phrase everything so the syllables flow. Other than that its beautiful.
<3Raych

No matter what the circumstances are...it is always wonderful to fall in love.. Hold on to that. To love unconditionally is rare. God bless you!!!

-Pink Butterfly-

No matter what the circumstances are...it is always wonderful to fall in love.. Hold on to that. To love unconditionally is rare. God bless you!!!

-Pink Butterfly-

That was powerful and Amazing!!!

This was a good piece and it had a strong ending, which is always key. It was focused and flowing, with emotion and power behind it.

Brad

P.S. PLease comment and vote honestly on every poem that you read.

Strong. powerful. also tender..

infragilis et tenera

I like how the name of the poem is the last word you used, it tied it up nicely. Beautiful write, 5/5!

mandy :)