by Sexual hysterias Aug 15, 2010
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
I'm leavin' town just the way that you like, |
by Faith Ann
Simple but very good! :) |
by Jad
A real simple poem that gets a clear message across. I like how you went with a traditional structure in this poem and also the rhyming was descent as it didn't seem forced. Overall you did a good job getting out your emotions in this poem and also putting your heart into it. Great job and keep writing. |